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  1. SkyKid

    SkyKid idk why i play

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    The story should be divided into arcs (like anime) and awards will be given for completing the arcs. I'll add the first arcs to the comment section immediately after this is posted
     
  2. SkyKid

    SkyKid idk why i play

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    The first Arc, Avabels creation
    (You play as a rebirth 8 ancestor of your character for the first battle)
    chapter 1:You must fight the 4 titans of avabel in a battle, after they are defeated the tower will fall from the sky
    chapter 2:In order to save the tower you must hide away the essence of avabel at the very top (heaven), you fight the 5th great titan and you seal the essence in her as you die
    chapter 3:You fight off swarms of arcane monsters (heavenly archer, heavenly magician) until you finally die
    (award-100k exp, 5 ccp)
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    The second Arc, The next generation (award 500k exp, 10 ccp)
    (at the end of the first arc ancestor is sealed away in a amulet by a mysterious man)
    (at the beginning of the 2nd arc you are now your character and
    Chapter 4:You fight your rival Cain (a rogue), you both are stopped by your teacher Masamune sensei (Rb 2 samurai/blader). He wants to help you both prepare for the Avabelian trials, The trials that determine if you'll be able to go to the beyond land (18f+). You both fight him in the fields of revere while he is using 25 percent of his power
    Chapter 5:You both end up losing but he is confident that you'll pass and keeps you afterwards to warn you about cain, you refuse to listen calling cain your friend and decide to enter along side cain anyways. Later You speak to your older sister teta a.k.a the legendary magician (rb6) about how to overcome the trials. Using her magic she gives off a projection of some monsters you'll fight and you fight them (3 baby jabbawocks, 1 jabbawock, 10 leaf lizards)
    Chapter 6:After you beat them you rest for the trials but you have a weird dream. You,masamune,teta,and 4 more future companions are fighting cain and the 4 titans.
    Chapter 7:You walk around talking to the other fighters. (Fushima,Genji,Abel,Delia,Marian,Ace,and Distallion
    Chapter 8:You wake up and get ready to begin the trials, you enter beside cain but you stay very cautious. You take on the first challenge (defeat 100 leaf lizards)
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    The third Arc, The avabelian trials (award 1.5m exp, 1 premium ticket)
    Chapter 7:You can cain beat the lizards but out of nowhere an alarm rings. You must fight the nearest group of fighters together. The fighters are non other than Fushima (Warrior) and Genji (Ranger). After you beat them you fight the next set of monsters (10 battlebees,20 lotus's, 5 cave worms)
    Chapter 8:After beating them you both walk into a cave exhausted to rest. But challengers who never came out of the avabelian trials years ago attack you. (an ignite and a acolyte). During the fight cain gets tagged with a curse and they both dissolve. A man looks on in the distance and cain chases him. You are now alone.
    Chapter 9:You go further and your reaching the end of the avabelian simulator. Cains brother, Abel won't let you pass until you bring back cain because he senses something is wrong. You must fight abel (creator). After you beat abel the simulator grows and reveals another road to go through. You see Marian on the ground coughing up blood and she warns you of distallion. You proceed and now must fight (10 beach pigman, 5 hydro's, 4 renias) to progress
    Chapter 10:You are halfway through the road and you see cain fighting Ace, they are equal until cain uses a Raven move to annihilate Ace. You run to Cain but he dashes away. Ace is mortally wounded and asks you to help him. Ace keeps saying help me as he slowly transforms into the Ace of prototypes (a black blob the size of jabbawock) you must fight him. After you beat him the announcer says 3 fighters remain. You are near the end of the road cain is waiting, staring at you.
    chapter 11:You and Cain talk and cain tells you that power is the only way to win this tournament and that friendship is nothing. You must fight Cain (Raven). You lose but he spares your life and tells you to meet him at the end when you get stronger. You get up and progress further down the road. You must fight 6 brownies and forenus.
    Chapter 12:Right before the roads end you see Distallion (A geo dancer) the prince of crystal waiting to fight. You fight him. You beat him but he laughs at you saying that you haven't seen his full power yet. Distallion transforms into Distallion from 9f and you must fight him in this form.
    Chapter 12.5:You are getting beat but cain intervenes and says that power is your only way to victory. You can cain fight distallion together and you win.
    Chapter 13:You both enter the gates of revere and return to a full audience. You both have passed the avabelian trials and can go beyond f18. Cain leaves revere stating that he has to get stronger if he's gonna conquer avabel. You look on in complete disgust and Masamune stops you from chasing him.
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    The fourth arc, Mikagra war (1.5m exp,1m jexp,15 ccp, 3 chic blue boxes)
    Chapter 14:You and masamune go on your official s quest to mikagra, his home village, to re-unite the village . He returns home to see his village in chaos and separated between the ujima clan and the khan clan. Masamune goes to his father, Masamura (rb 4 samurai/blader/stinger/crusader), the head of the khan clan. He says that in order to stop this war they must harness tengu's power. You have to fight Tengu bird and 3 ninja guards.
    Chapter 15:you give Masamura tengu's soul orb and his eyes turn red. He impales masamune in the chest with his blade and tells him that you've been a good son. You watch in disgust and charge towards masamura. After you lose to masamura you and masamune lie in the khan main house defeated. A mysterious man saves you both and fights masamura. (you fight masamura as the mysterious man, and acolyte). masamura and his clan leaves the household.
    Chapter 16:The mysterious man heals you both and leaves. You and masamune rush towards the ujima house to stop the khan clan from invading. (you fight 30 khan shinobi together). After that you rush to the ujima household and you get stopped by masahiro (rb 3 sylwinder,ignite,soul blader), masamune's brother. You both unite to fight him.
    Chapter 17:After beating him tobijima ujima and masamura are fighting par to par. The tengu soul orb is knocked to the ground and a black blob surrounds it. You must now fight the ace of tengu. (a black blob with tengu's shape but heavily deformed).
    Chapter 17.5:After beating the Ace of tengu you fight masamura and defeat him. He screams in anger because his plan had just failed right before his eyes. He looks at masamune and tears up saying that he is proud of the man he has become and goes to the center of the village and does the hara kiri ritual.
    Chapter 18:After the ritual the ujima clan brings you to there basement to show you an amulet but cain is holding it staring at you all. everyone charges at cain (rb 4 raven/raiden/assassin/storm raider)
    chapter 19:you all get destroyed terribly and he storms away with the amulet. The khan and Ujima clan sign a truce stating that they will never go to war again and must protect mikagra from people like cain together. Masamura becomes the new khan household leader and he bids masamune farewell.
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    SkyKid idk why i play

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    The fifth arc,Cain and Abel
    Chapter 20:2 months after the mikagra war you are approached by Abel. He wants your help bringing his brother back to the light. You agree and ask Teta to help you trace him down. Teta sends you on a mission to get items that will create the device needed. (collect 20 crystal pieces, 5 Dark Fragments, 1 kundo, 1 vesrah, 1 gangue piece)
    Chapter 21:After you get the items she sprinkles the dust on a map and it says go to crata (21f) in order to find cain. At crata you see Cain absorbing the fiery energy around there. He is protected by Flame sprites that you must defeat (5 flame sprites). After fighting the sprites he is weakened and you finally fight him in a fair match. After you beat him the curse on him activates and he becomes 3 times stronger. After defeating him with the curse mark the curse shuts down. Cain faints.
    Chapter 22:After bringing cain back to revere teta discovers that he has been cursed with the titan birthmark and only those who are descended from titans can bestow the birthmark and/or survive it for more than 2-3 days. You ask how to lift the curse and teta says that you must defeat the one who gave him the birthmark. You ask teta to help you find who did it and she uses the remnants of the dust to trace the person. He's at 27f. You journey to 27f and see the mysterious man. He sits and speaks about how the only way to rid the world of evil is to rebuild it from the ashes of corruption. He essentially wants to destroy avabel and rebuild it. You battle him (rb8 acolyte).
    chapter 23:After fighting him you realize all you did was leave a scratch on his face. He laughs and blows you and abel back with an exorcist laser. He walks to the center of 27f and you attempt to chase but you are knocked out by cain. Cain fights his way to the center (you control cain as he fights 10 of each f27 monster).
    Chapter 24:cain encounters the mysterious man and says that he has the amulet. They bargain and cain unlocks the power of the 5 titans. His body can't take it and he falls. The mysterious man walks away and the ace of titans appears. (you fight the ace of titans and earthbald)
    Chapter 26:F27 is becoming corrupt with dark energy and you all rush back to revere. Cains body is eaten by the darkness. After getting back to revere you see that everyone is at town square talking about how a dark aura is engulfing everything after 26f. Teta confirms that the king of darkness has been resurrected and the only way to lift the darkness is to defeat him. Abel runs through the tower to fight the king alone.
    chapter 27:Abel finally gets to the kings throne at f30,abel goes to the king (abel is a rb3 blacksmith,battlecracker,crafter with astra gear). he see's that he has took the physical body of cain and you must fight cain. (abel vs cain, mini gran zeal, and mini docloud).
    chapter 28:after abel is defeated cain grabs him. abel is saved by you,teta,and masamune. you all charge together for the final battle with cain.
    chapter 29:cain is defeated and the dark kings aura forms into his natural form. (he has on zeals armor but its gold, two devil horns, long hair, a giant sword, and red skin). He smiles and says call him Zenith king zeal. he defeats you all with 1 swoop and goes further up the tower with cains body.
     

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